Comments : The fall (another on my sister)..its a subjet that hurts

  • 18 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    Omg wow im so sorry that happened.. that makes me very sad... :( but u wrote it so well. it rhymed so welll and the flow was great and everything. u have so much talent. ur a great writer. i lvoe it. thank you for ur comment and to answer ur question yes that is how i feel and that is wut really happened.. ne ways great job keep it up
    take care
    luve angie

  • 18 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    I was soo sad when i read this one, shes sooo lucky to have you 5/5