Very beautiful written!!

I really liek this poem.. as i've written to other poets, i can feel the emotion that you wrote this poem with.
great job keep up the good work :)
Its one of my favourite poems.

I liked this poem, it was well written, rhyming was good, and not forced, flowed pretty well. i noticed an error, where you wrote "you're beautiful girl", should it be You're a beautiful girl?
the last line seemed a little long for me, but the poem was good overall
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Nelle --
I LOVED this! It was really cute, and the flow and rhyming was perfect. Sorry for the bit of delay for this comment ;; had a phone call! You did a wonderful job, keep this up for sure. I love reading your work! 5/5

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

Excellent poem. I love your descriptions fo friendship. You oobviously are a wonderful friend. keep up the good work. 5/5 Loretta