Do you love me??

by The Lonely Rose   Jul 30, 2006


Can i ask you something
if you say it correctly i will say something back?
will you hate me after i say it.
will you still be friends with me after this..
if i ask you will you answer truthfully
will you treat me the same or even better?.
Come here and look me in the eye
Do you love me?

*well this is a poem that i will read to my mr.right or i think mr.right in future time......but for now just a poem tell me what you think*

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  • 17 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    Well written i hope you find your one and only i gave up and im only 16 good job on the poem tho keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    Well written i hope you find your one and only i gave up and im only 16 good job on the poem tho keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by X2892

    Very very good poem 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    I went to san mateo (close to san francisco) and went to las vegas.......yea it was fun, but i was exhausted....

  • 18 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    Ummm ok, so u got back with ur ex (the 1 before nick)? so YOU broke up with nick and now he said those things. umm, i think u sort of deserve it but not all. i mean if u dumped nick alredy why does he care it's not his business. but if he dumped you, the same reason why does he care? he dumped u alredy. so i'm not really sure. but i'm not really sure too about ur surprising decision about getting back with ur EX. maybe, Nick just really wants u to be safe that he doesn't want anyone to hurt u....i mean AGAIN. i guess he just really cares for you, you know. he's saying these stuff so u won't go with ur ex. well that's all i can say. and remember, i will never hate you.

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