It Can Tell

by Sarah Ann   Jul 30, 2006


Under great darkness my heart grieves
Into the burning lights of hell
I see differently, yet my soul perceives
I have a place there...It can tell

As each life has a path to take
Demons feed upon their goals
But my road is steady, fixed at stake
And my lies had paid the toll

Where I was going led downhill
Now, the vision blurred. Nothing I see
They took from me a part to kill
What once meant everything to me

Among layers of cries and guilt
I am lost in walls of stone
Sturdy and slowly they were built
To keep me dying here alone

Under this darkness my heart grieves
Deep...into the burning lights of hell
I still refuse to see, yet my soul perceives
I have a place there...It can tell

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  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Great poem again, ur poems are so deep in meaning, they make to want more of them, u r so talanted.

  • 18 years ago

    by Liz

    I don't even know what to say about this. Everything was great, the flow, the rhyming. As always... Your poetry is just sooo great. I dunno what else to say...5/5 Take care

    -Poetess

    P.S. As you can tell this is my new account. I wont be posting as much poems as before but whatever poems I DO post are gonna be on this acct.

  • 18 years ago

    by Avellana

    Among layers of cries and guilt
    I am lost in walls of stone
    Sturdy and slowly they were built
    To keep me dying here alone''

    I love this.

    A, x

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Wow, such a dark/sad poem. Your flow was good, and the rhyming didn't seem forced at all. A very good write, hun. I really liked the middle stanza, It stood out alot to me. Well done. Keep it up and take care. 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by ChevyCowgirl23

    Really good!!

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