Really good!!

Wow, such a dark/sad poem. Your flow was good, and the rhyming didn't seem forced at all. A very good write, hun. I really liked the middle stanza, It stood out alot to me. Well done. Keep it up and take care. 5/5

Natalie``

Among layers of cries and guilt
I am lost in walls of stone
Sturdy and slowly they were built
To keep me dying here alone''

I love this.

A, x

I don't even know what to say about this. Everything was great, the flow, the rhyming. As always... Your poetry is just sooo great. I dunno what else to say...5/5 Take care

-Poetess

P.S. As you can tell this is my new account. I wont be posting as much poems as before but whatever poems I DO post are gonna be on this acct.

Great poem again, ur poems are so deep in meaning, they make to want more of them, u r so talanted.