I really like that one. really!

Do you have depression?

First of all, i would like to say that no i do not have depression, thank you very much. I write what i see depicted in the faces of those that surround me, and sometimes myself. everybody has days when they are just down in the dumps and cant seem to crawl out. i write what i see, feel and hear. depression has absolutely nothing to do with this. Maybe never is the feeling of neglect that i have seen on the faces of my friends, but most of all myself. growing up in my world is the only way you could understand it, and trust me when i say, you dont want to.

I really like this. It's very unique and the way that you wrote it was great. It seemed very well thought out and the beginning kind of confused me, but it all came together towards the end. Which is great and I loved all of it. Great job on this. Keep it up! 5/5