Nelle --
I think you did a pretty good job on this! The rhyming, grammar, and spelling was perfect. The first couple of stanzas didn`t really have a steady poem ;; which is why I docked you.

"Maybe, I should be like you and give up too
Maybe, I should be like you and forget about what's true"

GREAT lines! I loved it. 4/5, keep it up!!!

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

This poem has a powerful message straight from the heart

Wow, this poem has so many streams of different emotions all collided. I love how each stanza you have the same beginning.

It was very sad, and please don't give up... Life's hard, we all know that, but we gotta stay strong and survive. Keep up the great work hun!

~BJ~ 5/5