I really liked this, and the meaning was really great, (can totally relate) but I think this would be a more pleasant read if you broke it into stanzas and verses, because now it doesn't really seem like a poem. I totally think that it's worth the effort though, because I love it.

Sorry it took so long to get back, but I love it now that it's in stanzas. It is a great poem and I really can't wait for more from you :)