by derek Jul 30, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Why try to live why try to care when in the end the people u thought cared and u found out they used u so why try to stay alive so all i say is ur never going to be apart of me so let me go and die in peace so why care |
Awwah.. this poem is so sad... i can really feel how this character feels, you wrote it very cunningly.. loved ur style.. please read and comment on some of my poems, thanks kirsty palmer xx |