by Tara Kay
This poem was really good, it was from a different perspective and really gave the reader something to think about, it was really good. |
Wow-that's breath-taking...It's so well written-the flow is amazing and there is so much emotion in it! Great write-I enjoyed reading =-) |
by Tormented
AMAZING!!im left like speechless..lol.. but yeh the rhyming was good, the flow was perfect!! There was like soo much emotion in it!! |
by Megann Lee
Wow. I love it. It's very creative. It reminded me of myself, which made it so much more emotionally felt. I could really feel and grip the sadness of the poem. |
by Tiny Reader
Very effective poem. It pulls you in well for such a short poem. |
by UnToLd TrUtH
This poem is really good...All i could say was wow! lol It flowed so nicely and the rhyming was perfect....5/5 |
Wow this was a really deep poem...short but to the point! great write keep it up! |