Comments : Self-Esteem Decayed

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This poem was really good, it was from a different perspective and really gave the reader something to think about, it was really good.
    xxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Wow-that's breath-taking...It's so well written-the flow is amazing and there is so much emotion in it! Great write-I enjoyed reading =-)

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Tormented

    AMAZING!!im left like speechless..lol.. but yeh the rhyming was good, the flow was perfect!! There was like soo much emotion in it!!
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Wow. I love it. It's very creative. It reminded me of myself, which made it so much more emotionally felt. I could really feel and grip the sadness of the poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tiny Reader

    Very effective poem. It pulls you in well for such a short poem.
    'Her fool pain, nobody deserves to share'

    Personally I think this would sound better as
    Her foolish pain, no one deserves to share.

    Lovely poem x

  • 18 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    This poem is really good...All i could say was wow! lol It flowed so nicely and the rhyming was perfect....5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    Wow this was a really deep poem...short but to the point! great write keep it up!