"A girl he will of killed," did you mean 'have killed' ? Other wise I don't follow. Guys suck don't they?

Good poem but that line about killing threw me off a bit i kno wut u meant tho

Ow bum.
the last bit sucks.
it shouldve been:

If he doesnt quit now,
I will surely fade away,
But he doesnt care at all,
Not even on my dying day.

hehe that might go in a new one..
im commenting on my own poem =|
hehe hope you like .x