APART

by xxmichaelxx   Jul 30, 2006


Always in my mind somehow i can't let go

Day after day my love for you grow

Rainy or sunny I'll be here outside strong

I will make you see that you were wrong

Another chance all i want from you

No i can't take for an answer i don't know would be worse

Could never thought i would ask myself but am i cursed?

Enthusiasm filled my heart when you said "I LOVE YOU"

Just a second later i could hear myself say "I LOVE YOU TOO"

Apart was a word i thought would never come to us,but now we ARE apart

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  • 18 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Great poem, it was very well written! keep it up! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Awwwwwwww......i liked it its a 5 4 me.......and i found someone!! not a girl...im not bi.....but hes really sweet thoughand ur rite it is goin 2 get better...

  • 18 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Hey its me......wats up....didnt u get tht comment or something....owell....ttyl i guess

  • 18 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    I really liked this, it is different then your usual poem, but I loved it, I thought it was really good. I like how you structured it and it had a good flow to it.
    Thank you for all the comments. (^_^)
    5/5
    Breanna

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