by dean Jul 30, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
As I walk by the water |
I loved this poem, i really like your work. 5/5* |
by Amber Parker
I liked this poem alot. I think that your focus was a little to much about ryhme, and it would help if you focused on rythm and feeling. Anyways, I liked the meaning behind it and I'd love to read more. |