Oh, that was sad... the only thing i would change would be using "once" two times close togethr in the last stanza, but besides that, nothing. you painted a lovely picture : )

Aw, wow. Jessy. This was really sad. Loved how you used all the nature in this though, made it sound really beautiful. Lovely job. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Very good write. It sums up how mucha person means to you. =) I liked the flow, and the rhyming scheme was very good. Keep it up! =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

This poem was good! The flow seemed a little forced every now and then. The structure of the poem was good and the topic was unique,

good job
-AnnMarie

Sad..great poem

I liked this poem. the rhyming scheme kinda wavered, but it was overall good. you put emotions into it and thats what counts. ive been through this, it gets better. good job.
Driver

Aww that was really cute...your imagery and descriptions were amazing..your emotions really shined through your words..great job

Wow.. This paints such a wonderful picture I don't know what else to say... I could imgine everything through the poem. Beautifully written.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Pretty good, this could be in the lost love section too.

Absolutely heartbreaking. I love the imagery you created with your words, flawless!
Take care and keep it up~Holly

I think it was a nice comparison between a relationship and a rose, beautifully done. It could also work with friendship.
The third stanza kind of distracted me of the piece, but maybe it was necessary for the poem.

Good job!

Keep writing.

XoXo
Gaby

Amazing write! I love it! Every stanza is so powerful in describing your love-- My favorite one is:

"It never lost a silky petal
And the sharp thorns never hurt
The emerald green stalk grew
Absorbing all love from the dirt.."

^^AMAZING!

Great work--no doubt a 5/5 on the poem =-)

This is a beautiful poem

I've never read a nature poem that appeared to be sad, but you really did bring emotions into this poem. Really well done, loved the imagery.

Yet again another purely amazingly fantastic poem. It had great emotion and was really a lovely read.

This was good

I love how you showed a relationship with a flower... Very unique... The flow of the poem was great and I could relate to what you were saying... Take care 5/5
- Polly

Hehe. another adorably cute poem! reading your poems really are a pleasure...i know i used to give you a hard time about them before..but i'm soo so sorry about that..you do have a real talent for poetry, and i think you should pursue it..your an amazing poet and a lovely person..great poem by the way :) ...

~ Congratulations once again for winning my contest...with this very poem to be exact!! I really did think it was a wonderful interpretation. Good Work

This poem is really beautiful!