That took my breath away, i love how you out love into the nature poem, it made it a whole lot more exciting. an awesome piece, keep writing
xxxx

Aww this is so sad in the end, but I loved the details you used in this poem, it truely was beautiful. I could see and feel the rose as if i were really there, great work.

--Steph

Wow...this so beautiful! it painted a pretty picture in my mind... the endign was awesome and sad! but this poem is very good...the flow was great as well as the rhyming!! great work indeed!5/5

Awwwwww.. thats so nice and well written!! please chekout my poems.. my favourite poem is tattered and torn.. please chek out that one and any others!! X

Nice! its cool how your poem flowed all together! good job!

thanks for the comment on my poem! it means alot to me!

keep it up!

Super sweet poem joined with sorrow.

i love it!!

awesome use of words and it had a great flow!

sophie:)

p.s thanx for the poem ..i appreciate ur opinion!