by LadyPearl Jul 30, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
family
The happiest moments of my life have been the few which I have passed at home in the bosom of my family.~Thomas Jefferson |
Wow your really good |
by Anton
That was amzaing truely BEAUTIFUL |
by AnnMarie
Another excellent poem! The feelings were so vivid, and the flow was very good as well as the structure of the poem!! |
by Darien
It's hard to raise a family properly now a days. Life is just getting harder and harder because people are demanding more and people are wanting more. We do this to ourselves. I know what you mean about parents are always out working. It sucks. A really nice poem Noni. |
by Jessica
Aww.. this was very beautiful.. i found it a little sad as well.. the descriptions were great, most of the rhymes worked, and it flowed well.. nice job! 5/5 |