First off, good job but some of your stanzas seem off. like some of the verses should be joined or some lines should be stuck together...

Great job
Keep it up

Bri

Okay so now I have two favs.... this one was also perfect, the flow not rushed and the structure stood tall! It was beautiful and true!

Gorgeous peice of work,-AnnMarie

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Astounding job, the first two lines are very captivating. It was a little strange how the lines became longer later on. This could be in the Life section too. Keep i tup

I think you are a poet that I will look up to make my self a better writer. You have a great style and your poems are so great.
looking forword to read more of your great works

This was good

Your religious poems are by far my favourite and unique to any other poet within the site Michael. Your intelligent and devoted to your faith and that speaks volumes in poems like this. You have a strong opinion and yet delicate ways of stating of it where you make the reader actually stop, consider and even research your thoughts and poetry. Kudos to you darling I will never tire of reading your work!

Wow i love this poem.. different!! unique!! great!!

Wow really nice.. you seem very experienced!! please chek out my poems!

This poem was great.. it was different and unique, your writing is fanrtastic... keep it up!!!

xoxo Lucy

Sir, i read your poem 5 times!! u cannot belive it i read it 5 times!!! i am speechless