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  • 18 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    I love the symbolism and imagery in this piece.the flow is good, with it's hint of a rhyme.It has almost a surreal/abstract quality and can be interpreted many ways.Great piece.The last line is very powerful.

  • 18 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    I agree with Gary Jurechka...that ''hint of rhyme'' was very moving and flowed nicely without really having any particular structure. Cool poem!
    ~Midnight Sun