Like A Night Star

by Driver   Jul 30, 2006


So little time has been spent together,
Yet so many tears have fallen from her.
His past is a memory that haunts the present,
Causing the happiness to become bent.

She takes his breath away with every kiss,
But fights climb out of the abyss.
So much potential for love to sprout,
His past interferes leaving the doubt.

Her eyes glisten like a night star,
Yet his words always leave a scar.
He cares for her like he has none before,
Yet he trembles of fear to the core.

So many times has his past won,
Leaving him to think he was done.
Life always left him doubting happiness,
Making him struggle through the abyss.

Now the darkness is fading away,
As the sorrow runs from the day.
He will fight the night with all his heart,
With her he is given yet another start.

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  • 18 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    This was a really deep poem...i loved the way u worded everything...it made me feel sad..yet i felt hope..it was a great write keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by lexie

    Wow
    it was so romantic and from the heart.more guys should be like you:D
    --lexie

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Awww!!! it was really a heart felt poem! donno what to say! you are a good writter and have the talent!

    keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Very sweet and romantic. The words could send multiple messages into anyone's heart, and that I felt was the beauty of your words. Keep up your good work! xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    Very good, sweetie. Not knowing how to read this, I read it as I felt myself.. It's a bit like the horoscopes.. you can always fit it to yourself, because it's so full of words that can have duplicate meanings.. I mean this in a positive.. This should appeal to many readers, as it can be related to in different ways, all equally as deep. Well done. xx

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