Comments : Trying to

  • 18 years ago

    by Deaths Maiden

    This was a good write, could have been a little more descriptive but beautiful nonetheless.
    I understood what the story that was explained and hope that you see it through.
    Remember this for me, before you love and protect others you MUST love and protect yourself.
    Love and hate.

  • 18 years ago

    by Deana

    Lucky for us broken hearts heal and we go on to love again , though it may not feel like it at the time! good poem . keep it up.