by SilenceBreaksTheHeart Jul 30, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Theres a story here you'll see |
Beautiful absolutly beautiful. There's emotion in this that i can really realate to and if you ever need someone to talk to I really am here. It's always kinda nice to know you're not completly alone. Thank you for the comment 5/5 stay strong love. |
by Midnight Sun
I think that it was really good, but one thing that I'd change is how you repeated certain key words like 'erased'. I think that messes with the flow just a little, but I did REALLY like it. |
by xxmichaelxx
Thankz breanna. (FOR ALL THE COMMENTS!!!!!!!!) :) |
by xxmichaelxx
I thought i was really getting DARK. he he he. i love your SUICIDE,SUICIDE! |
by xxmichaelxx
Sorry that it's beggining to be a dark poetry. i just feel dark right now. |