Thankz BREANNA. :). i guess ur a good friend too

Ur welcome breanna and thankz for ALL the comments!

Adrian ('',)

Sorry that it's beggining to be a dark poetry. i just feel dark right now.
:(

Adrian

I thought i was really getting DARK. he he he. i love your SUICIDE,SUICIDE!

Adrian

Thankz breanna. (FOR ALL THE COMMENTS!!!!!!!!) :)

I think that it was really good, but one thing that I'd change is how you repeated certain key words like 'erased'. I think that messes with the flow just a little, but I did REALLY like it.
~Jules

Beautiful absolutly beautiful. There's emotion in this that i can really realate to and if you ever need someone to talk to I really am here. It's always kinda nice to know you're not completly alone. Thank you for the comment 5/5 stay strong love.
Always-
Shattered and Broken