by Kayla Jul 30, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
I lay in this still position, drenched in sweat |
by NATALIE
Wow powerful poem very nice you are a good writer 5/5 |
Wow, very deep. I liked the emotion you put in this piece. Nice work, I hope to read more. |
This poem is like a story, i like it. It's different. good job. |