Awwah.. i enjoyed reading this poem, it was really sweet, but also sad too i thought! the rhymes were well used too! keep it up! please read and comment on some of my poems, thanks kirsty palmer xx

This is really sweet poem at the same time i felt a little sadness. it also deeply touch my heart great job 4/7
god bless

Beautiful poem.
The emotions/thoughts are just great.

God Bless!

You misspelled realize by the way. )

But this is a great poem, I can relate in every way! Its like you took the words right from me! Its fantastic! You portrayed some great emotion and you really got my attention. Besides the spelling errors it was perfect. I likes how it was organized and rhymed especially. Keep up the good work
sincerely
~skittles

You misspelled realize by the way. )

But this is a great poem, I can relate in every way! Its like you took the words right from me! Its fantastic! You portrayed some great emotion and you really got my attention. Besides the spelling errors it was perfect. I likes how it was organized and rhymed especially. Keep up the good work
sincerely
~skittles

Hmmm... from the start im so impress, very romantic and it was so sweet. the rhyme is really good! excellent job

This was nice, it was. I have read many who are similar, but this is one of the better ones.

The Angel of Secrets

Strange that someone of your age should take on the subject of love. Still I like the poem, it made me smile.
Nice work,
Drusus

"I love you" "love you too"
I thought that that was pretty random

a week went past[[,]] the gap it grew
Comma there, babez..

Honestly?
This would be a whole lot better
If you used punctuation.

There's an article about why it WOULD be better.
Written a special someone from this poem site.
If you would like to read it, PM me :]

Another cute one. You are a good writer. This poem shows how much your friendship really means to you.

Just so you know, I do still care
I understand why your not there
But please know that deep inside
I think I regret what we tried

This poem explains everything.
Great Job!
5/5
=]

It was really sweet and i loved it.. it was sort of sad in some places but really really good written...

I thought this poem was really true - Its funny cause we always think that a relationship is that next step on from being best mates - when really... being best mates is the top of the love chain!

Well written - I feel your pain. Pity you lost the best friend you had.

Mo
xx

OMG I absolutely love it. It was sooo true