The Wedding Dress

by Chelsey   Jul 30, 2006


*this was another poem written on my missions trip..it is a true story*

He sat there with cold tears in his eyes
As he stared at his old cedar chest
Memories were around every torn wall
His life in that home has been the best

20 years and 3 and a half kids later
He can’t stand to even look around
The damage the hurricane did on his home
Left he and his family astound

A church came to gut out the soggy home
He gave a smirk and introduced himself
Said, “Please don’t throw away that chest
And thanks so much for all your help”

Everyone wondered what was in that chest
A ruined bible was one
What he really came back to get
Left the church blotchy eyes and stunned

He opened the chest and screws popped off
It was water logged and had mud inside
He pulled out a plastic bag that held a dress
When he married his beautiful bride

The stench couldn’t compare to anything
It was stained a faint yellow and brown
He pictured her hair done up and her smile
Now her hair a mess and she carries a frown

“I don’t know if she’ll keep this
Although she has for many years
We were going to give this to our daughter”
He said with salty tears

The pastor now crying looked up and said
“You might have lost parts of your life
But be thankful that you only lost the dress
And not your devastated wife”

Sometimes you have to turn the negative into a positive....

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  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Excellent job. You never know what hand you will be dealt. Heartbreaking for so many people who lost everything but escaped with their lives, there were others who weren't so lucky. Again an excellent job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Chelsey Congrats on the readers choice award :) ~BRAVO~

  • 18 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    I am bawling sis...speechless
    Wow you conveyed his tale with great powerful emotional captivating to myself as a reader - I doont see how anyone can have a dry eye after reading this...

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    Chels............welcome back hun !

    The message this poem holds is so very true . Though it may hurt so badly to lose the material things in our lives that we cherish ....they are after all in the end just material things . Those we love can never be replaced, once they are gone ....they are gone forever !
    The pain of the dress being ruined was heart breaking I'm sure but the loss of his wife would have been devastating .
    You have penned a beautiful message within this piece Chels ....a message that many will look upon after a *bad day* and hug their loved ones and give many thanks to God for the important things in life...*their loved ones*

  • 18 years ago

    by Raychil

    Chels this poem was very sweet. I hope you let the man read it cuz I bet he'd have cried just from your kind words. It was beautiful, I loved it, it really struck my heart. It was wonderful.