Fly free

by *Sweet as your worst nightmare*   Jul 30, 2006


Tell me you love me,
Tell me everything will be alright...
Promise me the moon,
Promise me the stars...
Give it all away
And fly free.

Be open to new beginings
Let doors be closed
With windows wide open...
Never give it up,
If its important to you...
Promise me you'll never leave...
Fly free.

Hope for freedom,
Pray for hope
Be faithful to your love...
Never give it all to temptation...
Just fly free

Note- this probably isnt the best, and i know not everything is proper but the poems i post are first draft and havent been revised as of now

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  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    Well like you said you post first drafts. A couple spelling and grammar errors, and I really like the flow/style of the poem up until the last stanza. Just a simple reworking of it will improve it a lot, if you're inclined to do such a thing. I know I have a hard time editing my own poems once they're written so I hardly expect someone else to do it.

  • 18 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    I liked it! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    It is not bad, great meaning and emotion in it, I like it alot and i will give it 5/5 cause i can't do better.

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