A Blue Clear Sky

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Jul 30, 2006


A blue clear sky,
On a gentle day,
You'd never think,
The rain would come our way.

A drop of rain,
Touch of breeze,
You'd never think,
It'd shutter the leaves.

Thunder growls,
A presumptuous strorm,
This is where,
The lord was born.

The clear blue sky,
Is gone today,
Taken by storm,
Where the remains now lays.

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  • 18 years ago

    by DepthofPassion

    I normally don't like nature or scenic poems. However, you paint the picture so well.I also read your poem aloud to a few other people(hope you don't mind)they were stunned at the quality of your writing ability.

  • 18 years ago

    by King of The Elements

    Imagery was great you kept time all the while i could have promised you that i felt some rain on me!
    =D

  • 18 years ago

    by -The-Undying-

    The clear blue sky,
    Is gone today,
    Taken by storm,
    Where the remain now lays.

    So very true!

  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    This is a simple nature poem, doesn't have anything vastly different to many other nature poems. The rhyme however was very good and it flowed well. Not bad for the simplicity.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristina

    Very good nature poem. i could never write a nature poem.. it seems hard.. but you did a great job.

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