Comments : Peace Of Mind

  • 18 years ago

    by Driver

    I really liked your poem... well thought out and constructed... great job

  • 18 years ago

    by Nancy

    Great poem. One little thing that I'm a little confused with... You paragraphs are all rhyming, however the second paragraph is missing this. Get's a little hard to read. Overall a great poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by John

    I liked it i totally got a "ready to see what i can do" vibe from it. im just upset that i m too new to have read any of your past poems

  • 17 years ago

    by thandie

    Hey this poem is awesome.. i simply loved the way it worked so perfectlyyyy....its perfectly fluent..
    keep it up :)
    great work and can you check out some of my poems and tell me what you think.thankz....and 5/5