by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex Jul 30, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
love is
Look at the Heavens, |
by Megann Lee
Awww! That is so sweet, it's amazing! I love it, it places me in "Awe" I really loved the lines: "Look at the Heavens, |
by Kaylee
Now here you use the words that show us we are reading an illusion but this one is comforting and begs the reader to understand the message and for a minute take part in it. |
by Loulou
SImple, sweet and wonderful. It flowed very well and had a wonderful meaning. Great job! |
This is where you realize, |
Again, i loved the short lines and the long stanzas. my fav part was definately |