Great job, i LOVE THIS .....

i saved it!!!

5/5

That was real gud compared to some of the poems i've read before, keep it up, if you have time hit me back xoxo

I really liked the short sharp format. I liked the way the stanzas were like a little snapshot and i loved the last stanza as it brought the whole thing together so well.
I guess I just love it lol.
Keep it up you have a great talent :)

I think this is one of the top 5 poems I have ever read on here. Absolutely fantastic. 5/5 Great job! Loretta

Beautiful, beautiful poetry. The capacity of your words are astonishing, as well as the simple flow that makes this poem amazing! Keep up your great work! 5/5

I Like This Poem. lol i dont no if anything could be better. you have a deffinate flow to your work, plus each stanza folows a perfect rythme. :D

Woahh. thatss really good. keep writingg moree stuff like this cuz i really like it andd i wanna hear moree [=
meghan♥

Real nice well done

Wow u must b good with all tht comments........but i liked it alot its a 5 4 me and keep on writein ur fans luv u!!

Wow. this poemm is really really greeatt and inspiring. keep up the good work :]

Wow. I thought the flow and rythme of this poem was awesome Hun. I would have to say

"Unbroken lies,
Not left in dust,
An open arch,
I am Trust.

A broken smile,
I do defy,
What is truth?
I am a Lie."

Are my favorite Stanza's. Amazing write.

I love this poem, again, u have a true talent with putting great symbolisum in ur poems, i love ur writing style. keep up ur talent. -bri

So very descriptive and meaningfull.. yet so very boring. I would like some more excitment!

Ok let me tell you i loved this poem it is so wonderful i love every word and every rhyme. I am glad you entered my contest congrats to second place. PS sorry it took so long.....

As soon as i looked at this poem i thought "I have read this one before", and yes I was right.
I loved it then and i love it now. I wanted to comment again because i promised Id comment on the ones you listed for me.
Its so amazing how a poem can stick in my head, and that i can remember it when i read it again.
Well done
xxxx

That was beautiful. very creative.
~sarah~

I like that poem it's really cool u sorta described everything

Wow, it's great, I liked this one better than the last one I read. It really makes me see the different ways in which you can write a poem. The flow and structure was brilliant.... :)

I really liked this!! (like mega bad!)

One word.

Awesome.

wow.

good job.

i love it.