You know I love your work right?? LOL
Small but great poem!!

This is a very romantic poem flowing flawlessly with passion

"That too good is true couldn't be a lie."

I don't understand this line at all. This was an okay poem, but not my favorite, i do like the ottava rhyme though, I've only written one, those can be hard little fellers:| Anyways, good work.

Awww, very passionate poem--I love the end! For the line:

"That too good is true couldn't be a lie."

I know TaperedDreams didn't get it and I had to read it a few times to understand. Even now I'm sure if I know if what I think is right--Is it another way of saying "Too good to be true?" I don't know, but if that's right then I think if you put that expression in quotes it may clear it up---Overall, I love it! =D

5/5 Keep it up, hun---

Very nice poem. I like the style.I also like short poems. This was great 5/5 Loretta

Ahh! It's so CUTE! Lol. Great write yet again. Very well written. I liked how you even could express yourself in such a short poem. The flow was ok, and the chosen rhyming words were excellent choices. Good job! Keep it up! =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Great language once again bu the last three lines seem to have words missing, they dont really make sense :s

-biscuit-

Aww this is really sweet. i really like this poem a lot. its very good. keep writing 5/5

I liked you other Ottava Rima better, but this one was not too far behind. I realized that i already did "I Am" so i decided to do this one=D Short and sweet!! && very cute:):)

Awh sucha sweet poem. I liked this one. I don't know what to say. I think the flow was well done, and it was well written.

Now that was a beautiful unique love poem!! i love the line "That too good is true couldn't be a lie." cause i hate it when ppl say things are too good to be true. u stayed at ten syllables for the whole poem except for two lines. the 6th and the last. was there reason for this?

Wow... i love your work