by Truest Lies Jul 30, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
Open the window, |
by Megann Lee
Wow, that's a strong poem. I really enjoyed reading it. I thought it was amazing and the flow was great. |
by AnnMarie
Nice poem but the flow and the structure of it were not all that great! There were so many short and then long lines! It just makes it more difficult to understand and keep reading it............. |
by iheartu
That was beautiful, and i really enjoyed it! it was sort of sad, but i really enjoyed it, it was very well written! good work! |