That was beautiful, and i really enjoyed it! it was sort of sad, but i really enjoyed it, it was very well written! good work!

Nice poem but the flow and the structure of it were not all that great! There were so many short and then long lines! It just makes it more difficult to understand and keep reading it.............

-AnnMarie

Wow, that's a strong poem. I really enjoyed reading it. I thought it was amazing and the flow was great.