Love

by Randomness   Jul 30, 2006


My love for you was so strong
It was strong enough that even the hardest gust of wind couldn't budge it
Our love was my life
it was what made me go through everyday
everyday thinking about you

Until she came along
What was it about
She couldn't have loved you more
She couldn't have been more happier with you
What was it

Ill change
Ill get a new wardrobe
Ill change my hair style
Ill change my make-up
just so you'll say hi to me.

How can you say you love me then the next you say you love her?

Just to let you know I caught her with other guys
not just 1 but more
She doesn't deserve you
Your to good for her
Shes just another girl thats here to take your love away

Don't get wrapped up in her fake love
get wrapped in my real love for you

It pains me to see you hurt
because you found out
you found out her love was fake
all along

you gave me up for a her
You wrote me a note saying you cant talk to me

When I read it
it pained me
I thought you hated me.
I didn't see why all I ever did was love you uncontrollably.
All I want is you to love me back and want me back

What I didn't realize on the note was that there was a drop of water
You cried
You really do love me
but why cant you talk to me
will it pain you because you broke my heart for a tramp

Well no matter what it is I promise I will always love you

Forever, and ever, Babe.

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  • 17 years ago

    by David

    This is half a love poem, half sad poem. but i loved it anyway. the ending was fantastic, left me smiling. thats the way love should be. forever.

    5/5 David

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    A very nice poem as i can relate to it, written so nicely. another 5/5 from me.

  • 18 years ago

    by i love danny

    Hey dis is real gud did dis happen to u cuz it happened to me an i feel ur pain

  • 18 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    You don't have to CHANGE anything. he WOULD notice you just the way u are. if he doesn't, HE'S STUPID. great poem. keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by AmazinglyEmpty

    *nods* yes this is a very good poem, its almost like it came from a past experience...? well, i think you did wonderful with the flow of your feelings.. very good.
    ur in my fav's so i saw that u had a new one, cant wait for more =]