*nods* yes this is a very good poem, its almost like it came from a past experience...? well, i think you did wonderful with the flow of your feelings.. very good.
ur in my fav's so i saw that u had a new one, cant wait for more =]

You don't have to CHANGE anything. he WOULD notice you just the way u are. if he doesn't, HE'S STUPID. great poem. keep it up

Hey dis is real gud did dis happen to u cuz it happened to me an i feel ur pain

A very nice poem as i can relate to it, written so nicely. another 5/5 from me.

This is half a love poem, half sad poem. but i loved it anyway. the ending was fantastic, left me smiling. thats the way love should be. forever.

5/5 David