Dark and cold
by mcrmysbobertthe spanis pengien Jul 30, 2006
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I'm lost in the cold and dark ,I'm freezing.iv lost all hope .i was a dreamer but now my life is cold and dark . i pray as my life goes on ill find some one and go to heaven .but for now i lay here dieing and lay here crying in the cold and dark. with pain that is killing me. |
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18 years ago
by Truest Lies
Very sad. It lacked a little bit of rhythm, but nothing mayor. It would have been nicer in traditional poetry format, with less abbreviations and better spelling.
"i pray as my life goes on ill find some one and go to heaven"
I liked those lines, because I sometimes wish that I could find someone who loved me and we could "go to heaven." :-D
Dreams are worth their weight in gold.
//T.L.//
