Very sad. It lacked a little bit of rhythm, but nothing mayor. It would have been nicer in traditional poetry format, with less abbreviations and better spelling.
"i pray as my life goes on ill find some one and go to heaven"
I liked those lines, because I sometimes wish that I could find someone who loved me and we could "go to heaven." :-D
Dreams are worth their weight in gold.

//T.L.//

Maybe my fave of yours, im undecided...

october xx