I enjoyed reading this poem because it was clear and I liked the way you told your story. It is a great poem to show how you feel about your friendship.

If you want to improve it you can describe certain things, or emotions. So the reader can feel what you're expressing. Sadness, hope, happiness...etc.

Good job!

XoXo
Gaby

Awww that is soo sweet and I can relate to this ALOT the same thing hapepend with me and my best friend..but it's all okay now! you did a great job on it! 5/5

I luv you oodles of bunches girl.....with eskimo kisses lol!!! This is a good poem (and not just cause its about me haha) Ur my bestest friend forever!!!! Neva change that! MUAH
xoxo
chrissy

Great job!! i really enjoyed this poem! thanx for reading my poem! 5/5!

Aww that was soo touching! i had a best friend once in 6th grade, but then she moved and i never heard or saw her ever again! till this very moment, still think of her alot thou!

its a great poem! and wish you the very best with you and christina!!!

This is a really sweet poem i think....5/5 for me!! keep on writing!!

Aww that was such a nice poem, and very well written. keep it up.

Ah this is sweet. i like how you told the story.
good job

Aww.... this is so sweet!
your best friend is lucky to have you!
Definatly 5/5 from me!

~Murder.

Awww this is so sweet and sad too that she moved ,but im glad you guys are friends again =]. it made me cry cause i miss my best friend =[. excellent job on this! 5/5

~Kristina

Great Job Babe! Sad and Sweet. My favorite part is:
I looked forward to lunch everyday at school.
You were my best friend and you still remain that way!

I also remember when you moved schools. I felt so lonely without my best friend to make me laugh at lunch! I thought why did she leave me! Was it because she didn't like me?

Great Job!!
5/5

Great the way you told this story of two best friends, a lot of people can love their best friend and relate to this, well done x 5

Aw great poem! I loved it!
Thanks so much for the comment!5/5

God Bless,
Taylor

I've never had a girl friend who i've been mega close to and you've really showed me what i've been missing out on, lol,
But seriously, this is an amazing poem and you've really showed how much you care
Excellent write
5/5
*Gem*

I like this poem, but something about it is just off. I can't put my finger on it. I like the words tho. very good.