I hate ur poems....their too good..
LOL
5/5
:(
~EMah
xD

Wow, this is really good, i wish i could write good stuff nowadays, all my recent stuff isn;t godd enough to even put online. But anyway this is great, i've read it 3 times and i'm gonna read it again. Rock on babe.

She knew theyâ??d never part.

So sheâ??ll meet him at the alter,

^^They were the only mistakes I could find.

It was a great poem. Loved the ending, very different and original. Your rhyming was pretty good too, didn't seem forced at all. I also really liked the 4th stanza alot. It stood out more than the others to me. Excellent job. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Wow it plays out well

Ooo. Very original! I like it a LOT! Lol. It had a lot of emotion in it, and it really explained sort of how people can still love someone after they have ripped their heart apart. Great write. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

I disagree kristen, i think the "and's" and "the's" are necessary to keep the flow smooth. but thanks for ur insight anywayz. I like it tehw ay it is.

This was really great, great imagrey. Yeah I cannot spell.

Aww this is so sad. It shows that no matter what this man did to her to stills loves him with all her heart!

Wow a very original poem... I haven't read anything like that it's kinda spooky as well of sad in a way....

The chapel bells ring empty tunes

I think that line ^ should be "...rang empty tunes"

- Polly

Very original poem with a bit of darkness to it. My favorite was the fourth stanza.

Very nicely written... A strong story, and very interesting at that. I don't know, I just love it. Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Very well written.I like the Idea.
It was a good read indeed.

Keep on writing on what u feel and like.
5/5
God Bless!