I wish i may i wish i might

by bryan   Jul 31, 2006


The flip of a coin
the stare into space
the bluster of a dandilion
the eyelash on your face
hope,fate,destiny,belive
the emotions that bring you to your knees
leave you praying to anyone
for something
to someone
for anything
please
a fountin that drips not water,
but miricals
a flower that thats drifts not petals
but dreams
a shooting star not guided by dust,
but pioleted by promises
an eyelash that shows you happiness
yet blinds you from misary
suddenly its not so bad to have something in your eye
and a penny in a fountin dosent seem to costly
its funny how a wish can mean so much
its so simple and yet extreamly complex
for a wish to have a chance it must come from the heart
beliving is a start and following your destiny is a clue
the secret to your fate is having hope your wish will come true

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tr!c!a_s@tanicangel

    Great job this is realy realy nice

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Hope,fate,destiny,belive
    [[should be 'believe']]
    a fountin that drips not water,
    [[should be 'fountain']]
    but miricals
    [[should be miracles]]
    yet blinds you from misary
    [[should be misery]]

    beliving is a start and following your destiny is a clue
    the secret to your fate is having hope your wish will come true
    [[I liked those lines alot. Thought they were awesome.]]

    It was a great poem, you just needa fix up the mistakes, and wah-lah ..it'll be great. Keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

    {P.S. You're hot.}

  • 18 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Wow this is so good! i really like it!

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