Hey ash- glad to see ur writing keep it up~hey can u comment on my new poem "truth u'll never know" it's a true story of the phone convo i had with ranny last nite~give me a call |
Hey ash i read one of ur quotes and as far as i knew...ransom didn't kiss you? rite>?? |
This is great, but u should have thought about all this stuff when u had him, cause now he gone and guys don't like giving second chances, u should alwasy realize what you have when you have it, other wise you'll be a vitcim of the saying "you never know what you have, until its gone" and yea you was right that lifes a b**ch and gods a pimp poem was stupid but i didn't right it, my cousin did and i just put it on here, but it was funny to me cause i'ma street kidd so i don't really think the way middle class think, i have nothing to be greatful to god for just to be alive and have a few family left,i'm poverty class so i never new what faith was. but other than that i just stick to doing what i do, so thanks for the comment i like my readers to be honest with me, it lets me know what not to do and what to do, but yea you should tell me what to write about, from the peoples point of view cause i'm just the writer i write what the people feel, along with some of my thoughts and feelings. n-e wayz pCe out i'm gone. |
by Kimberly
Hey ashley!! your poems are awesome!! i love them all!! keep writing! love you! |
by Niikki
This is a really good poem!It is short but is has a powerful meanin to it,keep writing your a good writer! |