Hey darl a very touching piece. i like the words used in this poem. very well written xx

Hmm very deep write! liked the way u potrayed ur poem. good job. 5/5

luv

Welll... i definitely need someone to whisper "everything is alright" in my ear... You must be really strong, since u don't need anyone to say that to u...
very well written piece.. it potrayed the painful truth about life...
good thoughts...

much love,
ipsita

WoW...i don't even know what to SAY ... let alone what to THINK. This poem is absolutely stunning hunnie...i LOVE it! so much emotion flowing through every word and phrase...5/5!! I love it! Keep it up! :)

That is different but i really like it great work xox sam

Wow... now you're writing poems about life huh? lol.... This poem is very uniquely written, loved it all the way. And sorry for the late comment.

Best Wishes
Michelle

I love the concept you used for this. I haven't read anything like this poem. I wish I could say more about it thought...great write. Keep it up.

-Poetess

I like the way this is written, i like the uniqueness (dont think that is a word) in it
plz comment on mine if u have time xoxo courtney

Life is like a novel, you don't know whats next
until you keep turning pages again and again
memories are just like those boldly printed text
reminding you of things which always rises pain

these words are so beautiful. a very profound verse, my friend.

peace
shobhana

That was really good. i expecially like the second last passage. it is so deep with meaning...the whole poem is! i love it!
keanna

Beautiful.. How lost we can all get, moving on, but using something so simple to do so. For those who have lost God, the rest can have music.. lol.. My piano is to me as your guitar is to you, and each new page in that book, is a new day, to look upon a clearer future.. Well done.. (I did read the poem right, I just got a bit carried away with this comment!! lol). xx

Amazing. geez. how do u make everything so good?! 5/5

Beautiful.
"with my own lullaby, i could rest my soul in peace"
That line was gorgeous too!
I've come to love recieving a comment off you. It always makes me smile.
5/5
*Gem*

This is so beautiful. I enjoy your writing so much. The last part of this poem made me cry. Need no one to whisper in my ears "everything is all right" All I need is my WILL and these six strings. I relate to this so much. All I have is my WILL and it is very strong. Excellent my friend excellent!

Nitin
They are picking all my favorites :) Just goes to show what a awesome writer you are.

these six strings could take me to the other side
where i don't have to be scared, i don't have to hide
never would i be a prisoner living like a life of insane
with eagles reminding of the things that rises pain

Tjis stanza really hit me it reminds me so much of how I feel sometimes.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy