Wow very good. you sound so strong, I hope you do stop....great poem!-xxxx-

Oh, It is a strong poem but too sad. I hope things are ok with you.
I think you did a best job as far as the poem goes.

BleedingAngel --
You did a really good job on this. I may have been a bit generous giving it the full 5, but I think overall, you did alright. The flow and the rhyming seemed really forced ;; which is never good. The spelling and grammar was perfect though, which is very important. You did a good job, but there is definitely room for improvement.

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

Wow, this was really good. it went from sad and having nothing, to finding the hope to stay. i really enjoyed it. well written too.
Driver

Ahh babe this is a sad/happy poem. See, the pain that u went through, that will always somewhere etched in your childhood, feels so real in this poem, as are the feelings. And god can i relate. But i can see so much hope and understanding in this too and that makes me happy:)
Because you deserve to be well huni.
Still waiting for that email:P
If you have myspace...add me..
www.myspace.com/anna_petunia
Talk soon, luv ya xoxoxoxo

Aw hunni i love this poem, i know exactly how u feel
My only way to escape
Was turning to self-harm
...thats how i was, and im so glad you are finally going to be ok. i hope you are not just sayin that, and if you ever need to talk i'm always just an email away, i missed u tons! your a great writer and a great person! awesome poem!
hugs-hayley

Wow...this is really goood!!! its a adiffrent style! i loved the ending..just the wording, and ways it was put together. jw....r we done worken on our poem?? this was GREAT 5/5 sis

I`m so sorry to know that you ever felt that way , Its good to know you are healing New friends can be good friends...if you ever need to talk I`m here.

All i can say is Wow....its a good wow lol. I really liked this one!

Aww, i really liked this, especially the ending that showed that you are okay. I think you wrote this poem very well, and I'm sure alot of people can relate to the things you write about. Great work.

--Steph

Wow.....this 1 is really good....i can relate bout this.......sooo keep on writing!!

WOW! So much emotion! I loved it! It reminds me of when I used to self ham myself. I am trying to stop, but it's something you just can't get over too easily. I hope you don't self harm =( Keep that chin up! It'll all get better somethime or other. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Wow, girl, I wish I can read sumore of ur poem, promise u i'll find sum time 2 read the others...ur still awesome as always...luv ya...=)