Another beautiful,heart touching poem....Its so magical that i'm unable to write it in words...Wish i would write like you someday....take care and keep smiling always...

Sweet and romantic... Beautifully written!

Wow, every words has a far too deep meaning into it...this is just fantastic dear

all the best and take care

Dear Bharti,
That was an excellent poem. Very chweet and romantic.
Nice to meet another indian. Keep writing.I'm eager to see more of your works. Oh.....and Belated Happy independence Day.
Wishing you good luck and charm.
Sreeram.

P.s. Watch KANK. It's Superb.

Xllent my dear.....5/5 kya haal hai?
havnt spoken to u for so long yaar....how r u? miss you....aap ka jaanu kasa hai? saab tek hai na?...write bck .....missin u.....love the ending of the poem :)

Wow, that was the first time i got to read an urdu poem here in this site, so perfectly written,
I really enjoyed it. keep it up
5/5

Perfect, what a poem!!!