Lol this sounds like you snoring to me from Nate's point of view. Well written though

"of my hostel room."
[That line jumped out at me. I was wondering, did he mean 'hotel', but then I started thinkinh, wow, hostel works too. Awesome]

So were you really in Spain? On a foriegn exchange? haha, that would have been interesting. I signed up for that, and hopefully I will get through in September. I decided to go to France or Germany. Really neat poem, you definitely took me there. Thankfully I don't get allergies.

It's absolutely brilliant the way you take something as menial as snoring and make it the source of this awesome stanza. Well done!
The entire piece is flawless, truly a journey through your eyes.
Keep it up~Holly

Yeah, i agree w/ Lance. Nathan doesn't snore does he?

Ha, i like this a lot

Excellent job, for some reason, I could hear this poem as lyrics. Kinda reminded me of linkin park. hmm..Good job!

Wow, Sean.

Were you in Spain or something? Cause I havn't seen you around here for agggges. Lol..

Really good poem though. Keep it up! && Come back from wherever you've disappeared to.

Natalie``

Ahh this poem hits home, too true. I was in spain last year in a school trip and its all coming back to me now. This has great parts in it. there's a little bit of imagry. The first and last stanzas about the clock striking are my favorites but all in all its a good poem. It's all so true and you put it so well.