Comments : Dancing (An Acrostic)

  • 18 years ago

    by Lance Hardy

    Interesting...very interesting

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Haha, I wish I could dance. Beautiful poem, it really does capture the art of flamenco.

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Wow, Sean. Where have you been?? Lol.. This was a really good acrostic. The title really dragged me in cause it was about dancing. Anywho, It was written really well. Keep it up!!

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    I haven't read your poems for a while. Nice job with this acrostic.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow.. that was really good.. it was powerful and yet kind of sweet at the same time.. loved it! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Polly

    I like this, I was a bit confuddled at first - I thought acrostic poems had to have the word written down the side like
    D
    A
    N
    C
    I
    N
    G

    type thing... And aah how did Darien know it's about the flamenco? Ah I'm too thick for this site lol... But anyway just based on the words in the poem I like it! hehe... Take care

  • 18 years ago

    by Jasmyn

    This was good

  • 18 years ago

    by ashley

    This was a well written acrostic, and I really think you should keep it up. Acrostics are hard

  • 18 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Awwa beautifuo poem, well written, those few line said a lot! keep it up.. very interesting!!! 5/5..please read and commen on my poems..thanks..Kirsty Palmer xx

  • 18 years ago

    by sibyllene

    I like this... you make an acrostic without it being blatantly obvious

  • 18 years ago

    by Leslie

    Oo I like quick and powerful poems. Its like having lightning stike a couple yars away. You want to see it happen again just for the thrill. 'll probably come back and read this just because it's so enjoyable.

  • 16 years ago

    by Dawn aka Dominique

    Hey! I love this poem I'm a dancer good looking out lolz!