Comments : A Gem

  • 18 years ago

    by Lance Hardy

    Who might this be about hmm?

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    My oh my...what an exquisite piece of poetry. You had me enraptured from the opening stanza, just wow!
    Keep it up~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    I liked this poem. It had short lines, but it was a good topic, and you seem to have a lot of passion for this person =) The flow was good, and I don't think rhyming was intentional again lol. Terrific write. Keep it up! =) xoxo 5/5

    Samantha

  • 18 years ago

    by Polly

    I really like this poem. There seems to be so much emotion behind the lines, and I loved this bit:
    "a small diamond of comfort
    you can put in your heart"
    It just seems so thoughtful and something I could never have come up with! lol... Well done and take care,
    - Polly 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Aken Sol

    Okay, wow. This is touvhing. Not going to poke fun at it, it's just touching.

    Aken Sol

  • 18 years ago

    by sandra

    Hello!
    That was the nicest read ive had in a while.
    You should give that to the girl it was dedicated to.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jordan Smith

    This is so good, I adore you for fellings this way for someone. My fiance just broke up with me, and I'd give anything to have him feel like you do. Please read and comment on mine

  • 18 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    Wow..
    "It's a gift, all I can give:
    a small diamond of comfort
    you can put in your heart
    in exchange for the place
    you have in mine."

    I love this.. Hey, I love it all, but this part is amazing. Well done. xx

  • 18 years ago

    by amandaa

    "You said to me
    that maybe all the
    feelings you felt
    were a lie based
    on the sweet words
    that fell through the phone."
    I absolutely love that verse.I love the way you've set it up, in kind of...kind of like incomplete sentences (?),but in a good way.
    Ya, I really like it.

  • 18 years ago

    by sibyllene

    I don't know why i never commented on this - i know i read it earlier. i especially liked the first stanza, and the last five lines are both succinct and meaningful. i wish you wrote poems more often, so i could read them....