by Lance Hardy
Who might this be about hmm? |
by HOLLY ARMER
My oh my...what an exquisite piece of poetry. You had me enraptured from the opening stanza, just wow! |
I liked this poem. It had short lines, but it was a good topic, and you seem to have a lot of passion for this person =) The flow was good, and I don't think rhyming was intentional again lol. Terrific write. Keep it up! =) xoxo 5/5 |
by Polly
I really like this poem. There seems to be so much emotion behind the lines, and I loved this bit: |
by Aken Sol
Okay, wow. This is touvhing. Not going to poke fun at it, it's just touching. |
by sandra
Hello! |
by Jordan Smith
This is so good, I adore you for fellings this way for someone. My fiance just broke up with me, and I'd give anything to have him feel like you do. Please read and comment on mine |
by C Cattaway
Wow.. |
by amandaa
"You said to me |
by sibyllene
I don't know why i never commented on this - i know i read it earlier. i especially liked the first stanza, and the last five lines are both succinct and meaningful. i wish you wrote poems more often, so i could read them.... |