A very very nice poem, very long, very imaginative, and flowed okay. keep writing.
xxxx

Sondos my dear.

I've come back to this poem atleast half a dozen times, with an effort to leave a comment; but there are simply no words to appreciate this work!

first, the form itself sounds crazy for anybody less than a genius to try and for someone to make such beautiful poetic sense says so much.

outstanding piece of work - but then anything less from you is not possible!!

love, hugs and smiles
shobhana

Wow, i think this was the most complex one ive read. really good though, i liked readin it, it kept me glued to it. keep it up.
Driver

A perfect poem with many nice words, I feel like i dont have enough word to describe how beautiful this poem is.

The beauty of a poet lies in the beauty of the poem she writes. u seem to have told so much in this beautiful poem of yours...! i guess u truly deserve to be my favourites...

A very unique and well written piece.Really deep stuff here.I admire that you wrote it in a traditional form.Quite an epic piece all in all.

GaryJ