Wow, that was sad! but good. hey, I'm really sorry about your friend! I give you all my best wishes! (5/5)

Bloomed Rose

Nikki thats really sad *hugs you* its good you made an excellent poem but i hope you will be okay soon.

This poem hit me hard....especially wen my nephew passed away a few months ago. he passed on march 22,2006. he was 6 months, turning 7 months on aug. 25.
this aug 25. :( his b-day is coming up.....:*(
srry about ur friend
keep urself busy.
and never forget the good memories.
-steph

This was really good, like every1 else sry bout ur friend, but he's not gone, just left before. Things will get better, my child hood friend died a few months ago, and it was hard but everyone helped me through it, and because of it i fell in love. so things will get better as long as you hang on. Awsome poem, even though it was really sad.
plz comment and vote on my poem..or poems
thnx
ch!ld~of~Darkness

This is a sad poem, i almost cried, and there aint many poems that can do that. 5/5!!! you truely have talent, keep it up!!!

Very good poem. though it is sad. 5/5

Very touching.
5/5

~Chelsea

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I can relate to this due to my nan passing away..
The emotion is spot on.. well done
5/5
*Gem*

Awww i recently had one of my best friends pass away due to suicide, it was one of the most awful things i've been through in my life...i hope you're ok

love
brittany(MD)

Nikki.. I want you to put your hands together.. like when you're suppose to pray.. and thank the lord for the talent to be able to write poems from ur heart.. but rally anybody could do that . but you got the talent and dont forget that.. this poem is such a sad poem but yet soo deep too.. very touching! well done and keep up the amzing work! 5/5

Aww, first of all, let me say sorry for your loss. I can completely know what you feel cause I had a friend that passed away about 2 years ago. It's a really good poem, although the flow was a bit rocky, it needs a little work on it. I'll still give it a 5/5 for all the emotions coming out of this.

<mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

This was truely, emotionally, wonderful.
when i started my senior year in high school, three of my good friends all passed away in all seperate accidents. it was so hard. and i know it is so hard to loose a friend. nothing can take that pain away, and you executed that beautifully.

One of the guys i was closest too was murdered at seventeen i still haven't gotten over it this poem made me wanna cry but also think obout our good times and smile you did an amazing job bravo

OMG, this is so sad. I'm sorry about this but as Roger Taylor sang 'one by one only the good die young.' 5/5, Em

I can relate to almost every word of this poem.. you expressed your emotions so well and it resulted in amazing poem..

I love the ending of
"and now when ever i remember you..
i smile, and laugh,
and cry,"
I can relate to that so much... some of my memories of him can make me so happy.. just thinking about how amazing he was.. then other times i can just cry and cry cause thos same memories make me miss him just so much more...

i'm sorry for your loss.. i'm dealing with similar emtoions at the moment and know exactly how you feel... well done though, you're a very talented writer.

5/5 :)

This poem has so much emotion and heart in it. I love this poem. To me it seemed you were writing through your emotions.

Loved it

Lauren