God this sounds just like me... I loved it. Short and excellent. Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

I think this poem really says I love you. I mean you described it perfectly. :)

Of course it makes sense.. it was beautifully written and i loved the short lines.. they really added effect.. it was a little like a haiku structure except that the syllable count wasn't right.. wonderful work! 5/5

I thought i was a really good Acrostic:)...and it got the meaning of i LOVE YOU out very nicely so dont worry about that:)...Keep up that great poetry!!

YES!! it DOES make sense!!
This poem was short and GREAT!!!
yes it got the meaning of I LOVE YOU out clearly..well quite clearly!!
AWESOME job!!
Keep Writting!

It is a good start, however I'm missing something here. It stops too abrupt, so it doens't flow right!

Nice one!